This is my first story so tell me where I go wrong please I know my spelling is bad and my grammar is non-existent but tell me if the story line is realistic or not
It was late summer 1989 school was starting in a week and the weather man had just forested a heat wave
. .
. He could smell her excitement, as it wafted from her. '
To be continued
This is my first story so tell me where I go wrong please I know my spelling is bad and my grammar is non-existent but tell me if the story line is realistic or not
It was late summer 1989 school was starting in a week and the weather man had just forested a heat wave
. .
. He could smell her excitement, as it wafted from her. '
To be continued
This is my first story so tell me where I go wrong please I know my spelling is bad and my grammar is non-existent but tell me if the story line is realistic or not
It was late summer 1989 school was starting in a week and the weather man had just forested a heat wave
. .
. He could smell her excitement, as it wafted from her. '
To be continued