“Please, I’ll do anything…” Jo trailed off, Amber’s gaze had turned predatory and it was no longer aimed at her eyes, but was rather fixated on her chest and her blossoming breasts
. Please leave constructive critiscm and info on any grammar and typos you see- this is only my second story (previous unrelated to Jo) so be nice.
. I'm so embarrassed.
“Please, I’ll do anything…” Jo trailed off, Amber’s gaze had turned predatory and it was no longer aimed at her eyes, but was rather fixated on her chest and her blossoming breasts
. Please leave constructive critiscm and info on any grammar and typos you see- this is only my second story (previous unrelated to Jo) so be nice.
. I'm so embarrassed.
“Please, I’ll do anything…” Jo trailed off, Amber’s gaze had turned predatory and it was no longer aimed at her eyes, but was rather fixated on her chest and her blossoming breasts
. Please leave constructive critiscm and info on any grammar and typos you see- this is only my second story (previous unrelated to Jo) so be nice.
. I'm so embarrassed.
